Fix It!
By Shawn R. Jones
Fine chicks
Smack gum
Click heels
Switch hips
For addicts
Kicking it
Ghetto Rich
In ditch
Copytright 2013 by Shawn R. Jones
Fix It!
By Shawn R. Jones
Fine chicks
Smack gum
Click heels
Switch hips
For addicts
Kicking it
Ghetto Rich
In ditch
Copytright 2013 by Shawn R. Jones
Haha. I love this and the way it sounded.
I am focusing on rhythm a lot lately : )
I’m not so good at it. But you’re doing great. Bravo!
Play some cool music like jazz or blues or rap and write as you listen (preferably instrumental). When you feel your poem can make its own music, turn the CD off. If you get a chance to try it, share the poem : ) I would love to read it!
Hmm… I will have to try this. This piece has a nice rhythm to it. Nice work Shawn!
wow, i’m loving me some rhymes…slant, init?
Yes, slant rhymes are the best! lol