Mertle
By Shawn R. Jones
Pendulum hips
And Godiva
Stacked thighs
Swayed eyes
Side to side
As her chocolate
Tick switch
Of rhythm and wine,
Made time.
Copyright 2013 Shawn R. Jones
Mertle
By Shawn R. Jones
Pendulum hips
And Godiva
Stacked thighs
Swayed eyes
Side to side
As her chocolate
Tick switch
Of rhythm and wine,
Made time.
Copyright 2013 Shawn R. Jones
I absolutely love this character. I think we all know a person who just owns every space they are in. Brilliantly crafted.
Thank you, Susan. Mertle is not a fully developed character yet. I hope you enjoy it even more once I revise it!
I love this – I can see her in those words – brilliant! 😀
Thank you, Suzy! I appreciate you stopping by! I am working on the revision tonight ; ) She needs a bit more description : )
You’ve created an interesting character, Shawn. Her sanguine nature has more to it. Looking forward to the revision.
Thank you, Uzoma : ) I switched two words already lol She may eventually need two pages to herself lol
No problem. I would say she’s got the fire! I can’t wait!
I wish I could write poetry like that….:)
Superb!
You absolutely could! Put on some music for inspiration and let it flow : )
Thanks…
🙂
I wish i could.
Mertle sounds like some people I used to know. I have not figured out where they faded to.
lol I am sure they are still around somewhere ; )